Imaginary Lover

Imaginary Lover

A Poem by K. Hicks
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No bad language or explicit love scenes

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Our bodies intertwined,
yours against mine.
The touch of your kiss,
the taste of your lips.
The cool caress of your skin,
a burning fire within.
The sense of taking a hallucinogen.


Is this real? Do you exist?
or will you  be gone like the morning mist?

© 2013 K. Hicks


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It was the spiked eggnog, I'm pretty sure! =D

A well named piece. While i thought the hallucinogen part was a bit of a stretch, it does help solidify the idea that what's being felt is only a whisp of dream upon the midnight nocturnal vibrations. It's always a shame that the movies that play on the back of one's eyelids go away when the eyes open.

Really nice ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K. Hicks

11 Years Ago

Thanks! the word hallucinogen was put in because I was on another writing community sight and they h.. read more



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I like it!! Strangely I relate. Imaginary loves are usually the best anyway. Sweet dreams.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K. Hicks

11 Years Ago

*giggles thanks!
It was the spiked eggnog, I'm pretty sure! =D

A well named piece. While i thought the hallucinogen part was a bit of a stretch, it does help solidify the idea that what's being felt is only a whisp of dream upon the midnight nocturnal vibrations. It's always a shame that the movies that play on the back of one's eyelids go away when the eyes open.

Really nice ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K. Hicks

11 Years Ago

Thanks! the word hallucinogen was put in because I was on another writing community sight and they h.. read more

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K. Hicks
K. Hicks

Greeneville, TN



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I love writing, be it poetry, short stories or even full blown novels. (which I have yet to complete a full novel *giggles) I enjoy writing romance, I write M/M M/F F/F in all genres. more..

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