Heroes of Old
A Book by Steve
 Just the good ol fantasy stuff we all learned to love since Lord of the Ring. Still, it is post-The Song of Ice and Fire, so some influences are expected.
 © 2016 Steve
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It will be revised, but your honest review (regardless of the tone, as I wish it) will be put into consideration.
Albeit at a slow pace, it will be finish.
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i like the sarcastic banter between the boy and the barmaid. i can picture the scene. i guess the man's skin isn't as thick as the boy's. it begs the next chapter and character development and plot. it is interesting and does draw you in. i'm not sure i see the correlation between the prologue and the chapter except perhaps for the time period. this is coming out nicely. great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
thank you, your comment is much appreciated. I thought of dropping it, but then because of you, I th.. read morethank you, your comment is much appreciated. I thought of dropping it, but then because of you, I think I should continue. Thank you so much!
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i like the sarcastic banter between the boy and the barmaid. i can picture the scene. i guess the man's skin isn't as thick as the boy's. it begs the next chapter and character development and plot. it is interesting and does draw you in. i'm not sure i see the correlation between the prologue and the chapter except perhaps for the time period. this is coming out nicely. great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
thank you, your comment is much appreciated. I thought of dropping it, but then because of you, I th.. read morethank you, your comment is much appreciated. I thought of dropping it, but then because of you, I think I should continue. Thank you so much!
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Added on August 8, 2013
Last Updated on September 21, 2016
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Steve
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I don't know where to start, so I will let my work do it for me. I crave a good fantasy so much I need to start one before the waiting kills me.
My work is influenced by The Lord of the Ring, A Son.. more..
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