Return

It stays my heart

In ever loving grace

To bide my time here

Just to see your face

 

I smile at the thought

Of you back at my side

For my love and affection

I will never hide

 

It is only you that I think of

From rise to fall

Only one person in my heart

That matters at all

 

I live to see you grow

To carry us on our way

It is only you that I wish for

Every night and every day

Reviews

[ShelleyA]

A good write about this special person in your life. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy. Good flow and tone. Line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm and enjambment. Rhyme is good. Every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Lovely depth of feeling. You express your love beautifully and with depth in this piece. I especially like your closing stanza. Your hope about being together shines in these lines. Good word choice. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!

[KGrimm]

Thank you for the kind words, Shelley.

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome. Have a great day!