"Solitaire"

“Solitaire”

Poem by: KG3UNFORGN

“The patience of healing that soon become strength, I thank her for coming into my life.”

                                                 In shadows I laid down into a deep thought.

Never knowing if there was ever a will inside of me,

Shaking the hollows underneath my feet,

I smeared the tears with my fingers as they kept coming back,

No use

Those drops of water shot 50 rounds a minute,

Every day I had no choice, but to love myself in this deep closet,

Trap I am in total darkness,

All I needed was a friend to hold my hand,

Next thing to it, my buds crunched on me with their lion teeth.

They threw me in the gladiator’s arena for me to fend myself from anger.

The moon turned pale and darkness once again covered the land of my heart.

I cannot see where I am, so I go to sleep tonight in veil.

Awaking to the naked Sun that crossed my eyes to fix upon it,

My heart’s buds burst into flowers and the words flowed in.

The light has stricken me with intangible magnitude; of course she is here for me.

Touching my soft heart without asking,

Almost dying in the process.

 Her kindness made me find myself through a hail storm;

 Wrapping arms of guidance to protect me from getting hurt from these stones.

 Inspiration she held to my heart and with feelings of child's that so easy can be broken apart.

 I am swollen with pride to say I have exquisiteness like you in my life.

Something that imagination cannot convey to my eyes.

 The sun and the rain from beginning to end, she controls it all.

 By an angel like you; becoming the rainbow of my gray skies.

I cannot thank you enough, with a kiss from the heavens and a hug from the earth.

 She gave passionate words and unconditional love unto me.

When all is unforgiving and beautiful,

 I will constantly remember you as my grace that held me through the shame that I walked along this pace.

 From my compassion to yours,

I will always keep you in the temple of my heart,

 A Solitaire is what you are and what you breathe

 For that, love will cherish us always.

Reviews

[nono]

Very nice, dedication? Very strong felt emotion. You did a nice job on it. It's strong and it screams save me. A heart of light to save someone from drowning in a pit of darkness. Very nice, and cute! Keep up the good work, and I'm pretty sure I know who it's for. And if she hasn't seen it yet. I suggest you show her now. This is beautiful, and so powerful. I can't wait to read more of your writing!!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. A powerful poem filled with emotion and desire. The language brought me in and held my attention. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[JENY]

Very touching poem….
That depicts a real dedication ….
To your love…..
It is very sincere…..
Loved the poem…so much…

[Solitaire-P0ette]

Don't worry I've seen it :-) I didn't know he posted it on here. =) sweetie that was beautiful..I love it. (I've told you this already) Reading it again made my eyes water. Lovely From Solitaire to Solitarius

[Ruth]

This is wonderfully vivid love, job well done! lol
A beautiful poem that leads the reader to really feel your words! Not an easy task :)
This holds such beauty, awe inspiring!
xx