Behind Close Doors

Behind Close Doors

A Poem by Kaylah Loves Your Mom (;

I cry myself to sleep at night
Just wishing it would stop
Maybe tomorrow it will cease
Then again, maybe not

You push me and you poke me
You call me hurtful name
To me it's like a prison
To you it's fun and games

Your heart is made of ice
But it doesn't even deserve that
Mine was once a rainbow
But you have moulded it to darkest black

I hate you, I hate everyone
There is no one I can trust
Are you proud of what you've done?
You've turned my soul into dust

If there was a door I could open
A simple path I could tread
I don't want to be stuck here forever
In this endless spiral of dread.

© 2012 Kaylah Loves Your Mom (;


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A very good poem Kaylah. You rhymes flow well and don't seem forced in any way. It's not rare for someone of your age to experience such behavior from others. A boyfriend or friends can often be that way when they haven't matured yet. Nevertheless, for someone in your situation I'm sure it can be painful.

~Pendragon~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Like the relaxing rhyme schene. The flow was very smooth and the poem is very well written, something I can relate to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing, love the emotions expressed and your poetic skills.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Should it not be Behind Closed Doors? Unless Close was intentional, of course =]
Seems to be written from experience, yes?

Posted 12 Years Ago


kaylah i love this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very good poem Kaylah. You rhymes flow well and don't seem forced in any way. It's not rare for someone of your age to experience such behavior from others. A boyfriend or friends can often be that way when they haven't matured yet. Nevertheless, for someone in your situation I'm sure it can be painful.

~Pendragon~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kaylah Loves Your Mom (;
Kaylah Loves Your Mom (;

Bluffton, OH



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I'm Kaylah I'm 16. I feel like I'm alone and I have no one. I feel like I'm getting depressed. I feel like a dragon in a dungeon and I can't get out. I feel like their is no room for me to breathe. I .. more..

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