Winter wonderland

 

Snow Falling White freezing blankets,covering nothing to be seen except the speck of green white all over like frozen yogurt earth covered in snow the sun makes it glow sparkle and shine melts over time

the earth is now green little white to be seen jack frost will be back don’t worry or fright just wait wait till tonight when morning rises the blankets return all green is gone except for the fern

Reviews

[ShowtunesGiraffe]

It made me think of a dark winter night. It is strange but in a good way. It was very good, however if you were trying to make it seem thoroughly serious then I would suggest not using phrases like the comparasin to frozen yogurt because it sort of takes away the serene feel of it. I don't know why. Anyways, good job! I am so glad you joined Writer's Cafe! :D :D :D

[Sabrina]

I love all of the similes and the beautiful comparison to frozen yogurt. The only thing that I noticed that is wrong is that there isn't a space in between 'blankets,' and 'covering'. Other than that this is a great poem.

[KFOREVER21]

Thanks! Sabrina I will read it over next time!

[Sabrina]

Ciao! Il mio nome e Sabrina. Io mangia pollo!