A breath given to the wind.

A breath given to the wind.

A Poem by kes
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written for nicholas 1979

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I have cried the blood

of a thousand empty wombs

I have shed a thousand memory-laced tears

and if I should live

a thousand lifetimes

I shall never stop loving you

Nicholas, my son....

© 2008 kes


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nice word work. Weblike, according to me.

"and if I should live"

In this sentense though, I found the usage of the words "If" and "Should" a bit confusing, or else unrequired.

Nice word work. You like your word games very much, Kes, I'll give you that. ~KA~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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