Didnt you ever?

i dont know i just need to write at the moment :/, im really confused im sorry if my poem sucks D:

I dont know what to do,
Im caught in your trap,
Between love and hate.

I cant hold onto you,
But i need you,
We are cold with each other,
But were always laughing,
How do this work?.

I spill my love into a poem,
But you wont relize till it's to late,
Maybe i was wrong to try have you.

Didnt you ever need me at one point?,
Didnt you ever think about me at one point?
Didnt you ever dream about me at one point?
Is that a no?, I thought so..

Reviews

[Ian]

Oh love!
Every time we think we know what it is... a slap in the face makes us realize that we actually haven't...
The poem it's ok... just the same advise... try to use some metaphors and makeup... hide the message between the lines... Nice job!