Slivers

:/ just how i feel at this moment in time

Im holding in my pain and fear
I dont think i keep this up much longer
The shouting,The fighting, My crying.

I just spent a day getting you back.
But then were back to the same old life,
Do you actuly love me? or are you preteding?

I feel nothing,Not even your touch.
I thought love was something to last,
Now im not so sure.

I know im not ready to let you go,
I know that i still love you,
But i also know your killing me slowly.

Reviews

[Ian]

Full of emotion...
Well, I've always said this and I always will... Not all the things that make you feel okay are good for you...
But... in your case... you're actually bearing the pain just because you love this person... or because you think you do... now... this certainly does not make you feel okay... so it definitely isn't good for you...
If someone really loves you... that person would never make you go through such martyrdom...
This is a very sad poem... still I love it... for some reason I love sad and depressive writing... anyway...
Keep it up! And I hope all gets better for you! :)

[Scissorhandds4eva<3]

its full of emotion... and its true... how is it some people change their mind one day to another