Im so sorry

Im so sorry

A Poem by kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
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Based on events that happend this week >.<

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I didnt mean to hurt anyone
I just wanted to try make you all happy
In the end i hurt you all, i just dont understand

I get close to one and the others follow
He said he'll wait till my birthday,but then
He started acting off, so i got scared

Trying to fix it i try getting close,
Close...,
By getting with his best friend
He said he liked me to!,so i thought...

Im sorry!, i didnt want to hurt anyone
I just wanted him close to me not far away
Im so sorry for that night, i didnt know..

That kiss,was all i wanted from him,
I love him and not you,i used you,
Hurt you,destroyed you...

Im not asking for you to forgive me
Im not asking for you to run back to me
Im not asking for anything...

I just want you to know
im so sorry..i never wanted to..
I never ment to...

© 2010 kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused


Author's Note

kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
its not good i know, but im trying to to cry..so i thought i write :/

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Ian
Uh... I would really like to know what happened to you... I mean... I can picture an idea of what it is... but...
I really would like to hear you... you know... if you need to talk to someone... if you want to talk about it...

Anyway... the poem it's ok... but I think you should try doing it a little more un-literal... try to use some metaphors... a little bit of makeup... and it would make an awesome piece... Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wat are u talking about this is great i really like its very good

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2010
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