pain the love of pain

pain the love of pain

A Poem by kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
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so i get a kick out of pain in my life
i have nothing else left to feel
pain and me were best friends
and together we will always be

 

no one can take pain away from me
life is just one giant pain
hitting me over and over again
it wont ever stop, never stop

 

living through these daily lies and pretend smiles
why? my pain may be high but i can still smile
smile with loads of little white lies
that i hold onto to keep me alive

© 2010 kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused


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kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
i know its not good :(

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i like this .. you can never go wrong expressing yourself, how you feel .. i like the last line "that i hold onto to keep me alive" as it shows you are still in control and have Something to hold onto to keep going .. finding that in a world of pain shows strong character in you .. dont ever let go .. keep writing and sharing your thoughts.

ps. that's the coolest profile pic

Posted 15 Years Ago


I think It's fine.
This is very well written, wonderful flow too.


Posted 15 Years Ago


wow what u talkin bout its really good

Posted 15 Years Ago



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