lieing love

well basicly its saying that love is a lie beacuse it wont last forever no matter what you say.

Hand in hand they said they would last forever

Together and never part forever,together

Just three little words shatters a heart but also makes one spark  

Believing one another is like trying to breathe for you an me

Love will never last forever it’s a game that they all play together

Forever and ever they will fall soon or latter

Author's Note

i know its sort and am sorry :(

Reviews

[Ian]

"Believing one another is like trying to breathe under sand"

I love that line... wow... this is a common topic in your writings... it's sad... but yeah it's all true... people dream about wonderful stuff... and it's not like that... it's all over one day... people fantasize about love... hearts, eternal love, twin soul, whatever... and when they realize things are not a dream... it all becomes a nightmare... Anyway, I really like this, it's real, it's the truth, it can be harsh but that's the way it is and we can't do anything about it... Nice piece!

[Onatah]

The bible says that love does not lie, but it also says that it will never fail. I would think that if love fails, or if it lies, then it is not love. The scripture is saying that if it fails or lies then it is not really love and you must then search elsewhere for it.