painful love

well its baiscly about an abusive relationship

holding my tears back
these lies of love
hurt more then you see
please stop doing this to me

my world is spinning and your grining
living these lies are holding me back in time
screaming for you to kill me but your rather keep me

am just an invisble lie that stands there
waiting for the right thing but its never gunna happen
i just tell myself am used to you
but the truth is i dont even want you
this isnt romantic love this is painful love

Author's Note

i know its bad :( am sorry i was one of my first peices of writting

Reviews

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So much of emotions in it and I can totally relate to this as I've just been through this as well
It's hard to see that the one who broke you is enjoying life while you are dying, and the worst art is that he doesn't even care for you
You have been so used to him that now your world is shattered, but he has used you
I know my words cannot get you better because I know what you are going through, but still ... Forget the one who broke you .. he doesn't even care if you are crying or smiling .. so get a grip on yourself and try to move on ..
I do hope you get better ... and I'll give you an advice .. Time heals ... But only Love can heal a broken love .. So don't be afraid to fall in love again
Take care
Nice write

[Ian]

Very emotive, I like it.
I hate when a girl goes through something like this... I don't really know how it feels like but I bet that it's pretty fucked up... Sad so sad...
Anyway, I like the way you described the situation... Nice work!

[Lauryn Nicole]

This isn't bad..It's really good. Especially because you're a new writer. As others have said, I can feel the emotion in this. Love it- Keep writing!

[Ourebro.]

Painful love.
The best kind.
Great poem.

[Satellite Heart]

That was really good. A lot of emotion. Great Work.