Waltzing With a Goddess

I found you in the forest

Waltzing in the moonlight.

Enchanting the trees and whoever walked by.

 

And when I walked by,

The moon reflected your beauty

Into my eye, told me-

Dance with her.

 

And when I did,

The wind whistled a tune

Ruffling leaves that

Danced with us to our song

 

How could it be that

A lowly wanderer like me

Could stumble upon a Goddess

Such as you?

 

With warmth giving hair,

Healing red lips

And sunlight glowing

From your fingertips

 

There we were, Waltzing

In the presence of All.

The moon, she was smiling,

The trees, they were dancing,

And the wind was singing

Our song.

Reviews

[Juzo Bhattarai]

Lucky to feel lucky and loved! Moments enjoyment! Beautiful description!

[Martin]

thank you so much!

[TheMalady]

Great work here! You have a wonderful way of expressing your emotions through the use imagery words. Awesome! :)

Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)

[Martin]

Thanks for the feedback! :) and you do the same! you do great work!

[TheMalady]

Thanks a lot! I'm happy to hear that, though I'll be learning from you as well. :)

[V]

Romantic, beautiful piece of writing. Entertaining, clear but nicely expressed images.