Unsaid

Reviews

[Ella]

Wow. This is a beautiful poem. It's very relatable. Well done.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Ella :)

[T.S. Sky]

All the unsaid words love your acknowledgment. :)
Very unique and well written. Love it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!
Glad you liked it!

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and thoughts. I did like your logic. Thank you Jyoti for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Sir.
Glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Meshalini]

Your words have life...
Love it a lot...beautifully written

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Meshalini.
Glad you liked it.

[Sourav]

So many things remain unsaid and they will be ;) That's the way it is. Enjoyed your poem - your rumination. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Sourav.
Glad you enjoyed it.

[Ardra]

very beautifully done Jyoti...
if words had life...how many we have killed without second thoughts..

so many words left unsaid..for fear of hurting others..for fear of rejection..the explanations too many..

i enjoyed reading it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Galadriel.
Glad you enjoyed it.

[Shuvadip Mallik]

Amazing...!!!
To me, it was like a mixture of regret, grief, wishful thinking...was there something more? I'd really like to know.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

That was it.
Glad you liked it. Thank you

[An owl on the moon]

I love how you give words a life, a soul, these beings that live in you and wish to find freedom through your voice. And dear poet, I can only imagine that the words in you will always find the most heavenly home.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Craig, for your beautiful review.

[An owl on the moon]

Always glad to find your inspirations, Jyoti.

[Tetu]

The first I opened and I loved it, now that you have my attention I can read the rest. Keep up.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Tetu. Glad you liked it. :)

[Stan Lee]

Nice writing Jyoti. Sorry I only just saw your read request. I've been flat out lately. I'm glad to see you're still writing! I enjoyed this poem and how you expressed your emotions. My favorite line was "the mind knew better than the heart ever could". So very sad but true! Thanks for sharing. Stay inspired! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Hey there! How are you?
So glad to see you too!
I am myself flat out lately, but i do manage to write quite often, just don't post much.
Although, off late, posting on Instagram has caught my fancy and it is much more easy but ofcourse you don't get to see such beautiful reviews and words by fellow poets there. That's something only WC can offer. Hence, my heart keeps tugging me to return here.
So glad to hear from you.

[Stan Lee]

Can I follow you on instagram? :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh yes yes please!
I go by my pen name - jyoti_ablaze

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

And do DM me there so that I can know its you! This is exciting!