It's never too late

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[thetish]

Wounderful. I especially like - a mine full of broken stars. Lovely imagine.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[Saddam]

Wonderful writing it is.
I like it very much.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Saddam. Glad you liked it.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Star Dust, thats what you are looking at, the residuals of a star that has fallen from a sky, but remmebr this, the stars are merely angels looking down, and when they fall, it is the lucky man to find an Angel as yourself, who came from heaven.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

That's like an enhancement to the imagery!
Thank you so much! :)

[Emily]

I love that lasts line!
You did a good job on this one!
Keep it up!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Emily! Glad, you liked it! :)

[Avinash]

Beautiful presentation and poem.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Avinash.

[Biswajeet Samal]

Never saw such poem nice go on god bless u buddy

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Biswajeet for your kind words.

[Kathryn Smith]

Jyoyi I love yout writing! Plain and simple! :) I love the format you used too! How did you do that. This piece is sad yet so happy. It is the best feeling when someone good finally touches you and makes you realize why other things may not have worked out. Well done my friend! xx

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Kathryn! I am very happy that you liked it!
And I have used an app called 'textgram' available at Google play store! Try it! :D

[Stan Lee]

Beautiful poem Jyoti! I love the imagery of 'him' swimming in her eyes and taking time to discover all the buried treasures inside. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Andrea! Wish people could really take such efforts to know others like that.

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Some times it just takes the right person. Beautiful voice! Starz x

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Starzy!

[An owl on the moon]

I read your words and sat in contemplation at the strength and joy a soul can bring to our brokenness. Sometimes it just takes one person to pause and help piece us back together again. Beautifully voiced, Jyoti! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed! Thank you Craig!
Glad you liked it!