It's never too late

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much for writing and sharing this!
So sweet of him :D
A Wonderful imagination you have Jyoti
An Outstanding piece :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Pragati, for your kind words.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet. Your words, kind and sweet. A worthwhile poem to read. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Jerry Martin]

As usual, carved out the shine from stone.. one more gem to the treasure! :) #AsAweaomeAsAlways.. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much Jerry, for your kind words.

[Sudeep Mishra]

Liked it............................................
Nyc swing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

thank you!

[Suhd]

Quite a tender piece it is...beautiful. Bravo !

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Suhd.
Glad you liked it.

[T.S. Sky]

Beautiful poem. I love it!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you dear! :)

[My writings231]

Waw beautiful poem! I love it :)!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you. Glad you did!

[E G TEN]

Beautiful sentiments Miss Jyoti, You have greatly improved in your writes through the past years. Your words selections are always a treat to read,,, very cool piece of poetry, specially the Second Stanz,,, very cool, EG.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Long time, Mr. Ten! How are you?
Thank you very much for your kind words.

[E G TEN]

I'm very well young lady, a pleasure to read you always. ;)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Good to know! :)

[Bear]

I love this it has good emotional depth Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
There are some issues of flow that can be fixed with the addition of a few defining words. If I may be so bold I would like to offer this critique edit

In her deep brown eyes, he swam
Searching for a flicker of light
And found a tethered piece of hope
With her soul wrapped around it

He excavated a drowned heart
And found a mine full of broken stars
Patiently he fixed all the pieces
Lightening of life out shined darkness

And happiness kissed her at last

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much Bear! Happy to hear from you! Glad you visited!
I will try to alter things as you suggested, if this format allows me! :D

[Giulia King]

Lovely poem! :) "And happiness kissed her at last" Wow.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Gullia! Glad you liked it! :)