Finding herself

Jiggling down the lane, she laughs

She laughs so hard that she cries

 

Running down the lane, she falls 

She falls so hard that she flies

 

Stumbling across it, she finds

Finds something deep, she loses

 

 Desperate for breath, she binds

She binds so tight that she frees

 

As a free spirit she rise

Rises so sure that nothing defies.

 

Author's Note

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[Abhishek Izy]

This is beautiful, snaking lines which contradicts its own fate. Flow is glorious and so id the design. Wonderful stuff this one

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

It's short and sweet. Good use and flow of the words. Nicely written

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much!

[Arshia]

Wow! Reading this just made me happy for some reason and I couldn't help but smile at the beauty of these words flowing freely yet leaving a lasting imprint on the mind. Well written! :)

PS: I loved the picture ;)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much Arshia! This means a lot! :)

[Salvatore]

As usual I drifted in your words, nice and delicate poem.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Salvatore. :)

[Deepak Belbase]

Sometimes I wonder how do you manage to express the life in these words. I mean it so deep and sometimes we don't think about these side of coin... She fell so hard she flies... Yeah yo do flies my friend

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Deepak. We writers do have a knack to see stuff other than the ordinary, don't we? :)

[Deepak Belbase]

Your welcome dear!

[RSB]

Cute piece. Keep up the good work

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is a superb piece, I must say... I loved the harmony your words created! Good work ☺

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much, YumnaKay. Glad you visited!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome, Jyoti! A pleasure :)

[KTizzle]

I loved this! As said by others, I really liked the juxtaposition of the lines. They really contrast to one another that makes for me an enjoyable read. Also the content helps. I am a free spirit so this poem resonated deeply within me.

Good job.

Thanks for posting!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you for your kind words.
I am glad it resonated with your spirit!
Good day!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Well, Im glad I came back at a good time to read this beauty of writing. I loved how it unwrapped total opposites in the actions itself. Very good, keep it up

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I am glad that you visited and enjoyed my work.

[Giulia King]

Absolutely beautifully written! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Gullia!