O Wanderer!

Wanderer, oh wanderer where have you been?

I've been to the fairyland to see their queen.

Is she just as classy as the people say?

She roams like a pixie and is on her way!

Author's Note

Doodle!
Do leave a comment. :)

Thank you for your time!

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Short and sweet..You expressed so much in few lines... I always enjoy your writings... good one...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Anurag! Your kind words are very encouraging! :)

[JayceeC]

This is a fun description of the pic. The nursery rhyme rhythm and structure give it a playful feel.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Jaycee! I was in a fun mood while penning this.

[JayceeC]

It shows hun. And you should have fun writing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Yes....... :D

[Bear]

More people should doodle like this, it is a great mental exercise that sharpens the writing skills and expands the imagination. Doodle away my friend, and let it take you to new heights of writing, Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh yes! Well, I for one, will definitely doodle more!
Thank you so much, Bear! Good day!

[samparks,sam]

nice very nice I like it. in really nice

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

[Richard🖌]

Such a brilliantly gorgeous picture, Jyoti, and a marvelous duo of Couplets in spot-on rhyme, with a sweet flow, and I love the imagery your excellent pen has portrayed in my imagination.
L2, make it, "I've" been to the fairyland, etc; and, add a period at the end. L3, Is she "just" as classy, etc; and all your lines will be in perfect count, reading ever smoother, but whatever, it's a little gem you wrote! : )

Truly, an overall wondrously-touching, sweet composition … hugs to you, Jyoti ⁓ Richard

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh Richard! Thank you so very much!
I have edited the piece as per your suggestion. Thank you for your kind review!
Hugs to you too!

[Einstein Noodle]

doodles are fun ........
E.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh yes they are!
Thank you for the read, E!
Good day!

[Mary Helda]

Woooow,sweetie this is an elegant and fantastuc piece,,and with the image,it blends perfectly well

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much, Mary!

[Mary Helda]

you are welcome:-)

[E G TEN]

Hey Jyoti , This is so cute' and classy, the poem I mean.
Happy Hearts Day my friend;) So cool,Thanks EG

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, E G Ten!
So happy to have you here!
Happy hearts day to you too! :)

[Blackheart]

Short and beautiful. Liked the flow of words as well. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! N u don't have black heart!
Good day!

[Blackheart]

Hahaha...flattered! :)