Darkness (10-Words)
A Poem by
Jyoti_Ablaze
Bleeding words..
Sometimes the nights are dark but the days are darker.
© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze
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I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...
life and death is just that simple...dana
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your insightful words.
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before the rain sometimes it let you afraid of a storm but life always win, the hope always win... I Gauss i fall in love with your words... they sometimes remind of a dream i always want to live in...
Posted 9 Years Ago
before the rain sometimes it let you afraid of a storm but life always win, the hope always win... I Gauss i fall in love with your words... they sometimes remind of a dream i always want to live in...
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your kind words.
True, Jyoti. Love the picture you have chosen as well.
Posted 9 Years Ago
True, Jyoti. Love the picture you have chosen as well.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Melissa!
9 Years Ago
You're welcome!
This really hits the reader without even having to clarify what it means. A sad little comment on a life.
Posted 9 Years Ago
This really hits the reader without even having to clarify what it means. A sad little comment on a life.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words.
Nice one Jyoti! The nights are often a peaceful, quiet dark. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Nice one Jyoti! The nights are often a peaceful, quiet dark. :)
9 Years Ago
Yes, they are.
Thank you for the kind words.
I love the way its open to interpret your own kind of darkness. Awesome 10 word write :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
I love the way its open to interpret your own kind of darkness. Awesome 10 word write :)
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Aaron!
Very powerful line!
Keep it up!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very powerful line!
Keep it up!
Wow, concise yet powerful.
I find I can relate to this piece. Really thought it was great! Well done.
I'm going to save this in my favorites.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wow, concise yet powerful.
I find I can relate to this piece. Really thought it was great! Well done.
I'm going to save this in my favorites.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Maria for your kind words. They encourages a lot. :)
Ah, how darkly you play with the light of the world within. Such hidden places, secret sighing thoughts of these paths we walk on, and must face even in the pain of sunlit illumination. Powerful.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Ah, how darkly you play with the light of the world within. Such hidden places, secret sighing thoughts of these paths we walk on, and must face even in the pain of sunlit illumination. Powerful.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Craig! Means a lot. :)
Well done dark eyes, the hearts are even darker still! (10 words)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Well done dark eyes, the hearts are even darker still! (10 words)
9 Years Ago
Thank you, sir and the heart may bleed black slime. (10 words)
Looks like the trees on All Hallows Eve. Valentine
Posted 9 Years Ago
Looks like the trees on All Hallows Eve. Valentine
9 Years Ago
Dark days look all the same.
Thank you for the comment.
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Added on October 27, 2015
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Jyoti_Ablaze Diamond city, India
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Hey! I am Jyoti, have seen 21 winters pass without a trace of snow; (it never snows in the west region of INDIA).
Hope to see it someday..!
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