I read this over and over Jyoti..Life can hit a body hard and it's known that Christmas eve in those
hours between 6 and 8:30 there are the most recorded suicides. But I love the simplicity here...
which I imagine is true...
So true.
Yeah, sometimes the days be loomed way much darker than the darkness of gone-night. And it all just seems to be happened when you're in love & your spirit keep bobbing in the ocean of infatuated lake of fairy dreams, for no reason. Kinda love the depth of your poetry. Short. Simple. And artistically quite interesting. Looking forward to reading your work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Adams for your warm review. Always welcome to browse through any of my work here.
G.. read moreThank you Adams for your warm review. Always welcome to browse through any of my work here.
Glad you visited.
Absolutely Amazing!!!
Loved it!!!
:)
you inspired this mess:
I always escape the dark, to stray in the daylight.
forgive me:)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Wow! That was cool!
Kinda has an opposite view point but bang on!
Thank you for your k.. read moreWow! That was cool!
Kinda has an opposite view point but bang on!
Thank you for your kind visit!
This is downright awesome. I really admire writers like yourself who can accomplish so much depth and meaning in such few words. This piece brings forth a feeling that we all have, but just usually don't think to put into words. This was really good. Stay inspired.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Kristan. Your kind visit is very much appreciated! :)
Hey! I am Jyoti, have seen 21 winters pass without a trace of snow; (it never snows in the west region of INDIA).
Hope to see it someday..!
Believe in living and loving every moment of life.. Of cou.. more..