Hum the (Hindi Poem)

Hum the (Hindi Poem)

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze




Hum the (Hindi poem)

Kehne ko to me bhi thi, vo bhi tha
Dono ki apni duniya bhi thi
Magar kuch khwab hakikat ke saye me jhulaste reh gaye
Aur hum jahan the vahi adhure reh gaye
Kehne ko to me bhi thi, vo bhi tha

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English Translation:


 
We lived

To say, I lived and he did, as well
we both dwelled in our own worlds
But some dreams just scorched in the shadows of reality
And we stayed where we were in the incompleteness
To say, I lived and he did, as well

© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze


Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
My first attempt at Hindi poetry.
Constructive criticism is expected.
Thank you for your time.

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Tks
Holy moly, you know hindi?? This reminded me artfully of Veer Zaara..It is a wonderful rendition of a lovestory that could have gone so many ways. A good first attempt, and the title was very aptly chosen!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

That is interesting to know. Is it dhandiya season now?
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Yes Garba, Dodiyo and Dandiya nights! Today is the 5th day of the fest.
Tks

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the heads up! Enjoy yourself!
I can't say that I know anything about Hindi poetry but the English version was sad, yet lovely. I loved the picture too -- went with the words perfectly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Melissa! Glad you liked it :)
MelissaAndres

9 Years Ago

You are so welcome!

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Hey! I am Jyoti, have seen 21 winters pass without a trace of snow; (it never snows in the west region of INDIA). Hope to see it someday..! Believe in living and loving every moment of life.. Of cou.. more..

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