I feel you

I feel you

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze








When the glistening sunlight showers its warmth

I feel you embracing me,

When I see a shooting star leaving its trail on the sky

I see you descending for me.

 

When the mighty stars’ light penetrates through the cloud

I feel you twinkling above,

When a fresh morning breeze teases me with its charm

I discern your good wishes for me.

 

When I pass a playground and hear a child’s laughter

Nostalgia of our time grips me,

When the magical droplets of rain shimmer and dance

I feel you smiling and blessing me!

 

 

© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze


Author's Note

Jyoti_Ablaze
It is said that death can only touch the body and not the soul.

So this piece is penned in the memories of my late father.
Miss you, Papa!

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Just reading this got me connected to the sun.
Your father must have been a great soul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Cody. N its a tribute to my father.
this poem to me has so much emotion

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Sweetie. I am glad you felt it.
a beautiful tribute,he would be proud and yes the soul lives on

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Wordman.
Nicely penned tribute. You need one minor change as penetrate needs to be penetrates since light is the noun. Otherwise, it's evident you put thought into this one. Cherish the memories you have of your time with him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

I keep him as much alive as possible, in everything I do.
Thank you for the review and pointi.. read more
"I discern your good wishes for me". I really like this line. And that's the tricky thing about death is that it affects the living much more than the one who is gone. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

True. Thank you for your kind review.
A well crafted piece so cleverly... i admire you are the one of them who make my senses week. No smell of sadness and grief. your addiction could be too dangerous if i don't read your upcoming work very soon.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
firstly ,so sorry to hear that ....memories shape the image of the person good memories makes u happening person ..and bad ones can make u a raw one ...and with all those good one present in your beautiful heart ..i get the secret of your writing .....he is definitely happy for u ..god bless you..:)))))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
A wonderful write with delicate feelings. Thank you for the reference, and as a father myself, i feel you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
Insight "MH"

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
Beautiful poem, I really liked the theme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
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This is a lovely piece filled with strong emotive language. I have no words to say how wonderful this piece of writing is, so I'm going to shut up here and appreciate your talent and experience through your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much.

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Hey! I am Jyoti, have seen 21 winters pass without a trace of snow; (it never snows in the west region of INDIA). Hope to see it someday..! Believe in living and loving every moment of life.. Of cou.. more..

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