I feel you

When the glistening sunlight showers its warmth

I feel you embracing me,

When I see a shooting star leaving its trail on the sky

I see you descending for me.

 

When the mighty stars’ light penetrates through the cloud

I feel you twinkling above,

When a fresh morning breeze teases me with its charm

I discern your good wishes for me.

 

When I pass a playground and hear a child’s laughter

Nostalgia of our time grips me,

When the magical droplets of rain shimmer and dance

I feel you smiling and blessing me!

 

 

Author's Note

It is said that death can only touch the body and not the soul.

So this piece is penned in the memories of my late father.
Miss you, Papa!

Reviews

[Rajah de AzinPrinz Phyb..]

Makes me think of absent loved ones. Impressive.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Emily]

I really like it!
Keep on writing!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Emily!

[Kay]

This is lovely, Jyoti. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much.

[Saddam]

A beautiful and true tribute to your father.
Its great one too....

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you very much.

[Saddam]

Most welcome dear friend.

[Saddam]

Most welcome dear friend.

[Dak]

this was beautiful. well written

-Dak

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your father. Your words cherished moments and you left the reader with positive place. The ending was wonderful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Cameron Griffith]

Absolutely love pieces like this, really brings out the love that someone had for another person. May your father rest in peace, beautifully written for beautiful times you must have had with him

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Cameron for the kind comment.

[Valentine]

This also brings to mind our Lord in Heaven. Honey, we all feel the loss of parents. Just do your best to make his memory proud of you. Valentine

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you, Valentine. I lost my dad when I was 16 years old and till today, after 5 years I am not at peace with his memories, I miss him.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

passionate and heartfelt dedication...........
He sure will be so proud of you.......
god bless!
:)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much.

[Ben]

Nice piece, I really love it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you.

[Ben]

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