it's just happening since long that women're oft. crushed down under the chest of men, & well consumed by their starved-behaviour... perhaps, however, yet indeed it's true sayin' that... now-a-days, such cynicism type love has almost reached beyond the edge of 'creepy-ness' which further has yo today so spoiled around the arena o' 'tis trespass wickedly pickedly so sicked world. and your poetry generously shedding a spray of such lightness 'pon the hearts'. kinda very deep but yes.. also a very dark poetry you come to get licked in. nicely done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind commentary.
7 Years Ago
been a kind pleasure readin' some of your work, & watching the analogies of love-norms in your words.. read morebeen a kind pleasure readin' some of your work, & watching the analogies of love-norms in your words as well.
Woah. This is a very cool, dark poem. I like the way that each image builds off of the one before it. The phrases "screams muffled into silences" and "silences that echoed" are both very interesting, playing with the ideas of sound and silence in a rather paradoxical and sinister way. "Walls that wept blood" is also cool, especially in the way that weeping is brought full-circle through "sooty eyes" (which are as black as the blood wept by the walls - wow, quite the image there!) Overall, there is a lot of highly intense imagery wrapped into this short piece. Nice work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Alicia. Sometimes my imagination go wild and i can never help it.
Fascinating, certainly, and well written. The brevity of this poem works well to highlight its story. I wonder, does this poem relate to any event in history?
Thank you for your kind review.
And no, I don't remember any event in history that inspired t.. read moreThank you for your kind review.
And no, I don't remember any event in history that inspired this piece. But yes each piece have their own history of origination and formation.
Thank you.
8 Years Ago
Oh yes, now when I read this again, I do feel it could b easily related to historical bloodshed.. Th.. read moreOh yes, now when I read this again, I do feel it could b easily related to historical bloodshed.. Thank you for the insight.
Wow... I especially liked this line...Silences that echoed through the walls... you could say it speaks volumes. Lol. This is a well done poem and highly descriptive. It evokes imagery in and of itself. Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'', but my friends call me Wolf.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Oh thank you Wolf!
It is the line that propagated this whole piece. Glad you liked it.
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Hope to see it someday..!
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