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A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze

My nape just itched,
I turned around.

Found him staring,
goofy-dumb as a hound.

I pretended to look bored,
gave a frown,

He knew it well by now,
smiled up till his crown.

© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze


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So adorable! The high school romance.....it is so often one sided. I liked this a lot, Jyoti. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydia. I am glad that you like it! It means a lot.
This brevity made me smile! Nice rhyme!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Indra Neil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome!
So cheeky ;) both the poem and the boy.. i like your simplistic style, refreshing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I am glad you liked it.

I really appreciate short and cute stuff like this, well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
good one...short and sweet


Posted 9 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Simple and precise. Liked your thoughts

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it!
Simple yet effective and relatable too. Well written, thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the Review..!
short but very relatable and effective

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the Review..!
A nice little poem you wrote.

Sweet, innocent and relatable.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the Review..!

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Jyoti_Ablaze
Jyoti_Ablaze

Diamond city, India



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Hey! I am Jyoti, have seen 21 winters pass without a trace of snow; (it never snows in the west region of INDIA). Hope to see it someday..! Believe in living and loving every moment of life.. Of cou.. more..

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