Classroom

My nape just itched,

I turned around.

Found him staring,

goofy-dumb as a hound.

I pretended to look bored,

gave a frown,

He knew it well by now,

smiled up till his crown.

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is so so beautiful girl, valentines and childhood memories and ofcos a good childhood crush

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you Cassie. School is the best times!

[Einstein Noodle]

"goofy-dumb as a hound" ahahaha that's me for sure ... so sad i am still that goofy ;} your poem put me in my desk back in ohhh lets say 4th grade .. when all those pretty dimpled giggly girls grew eventually as the main attraction .. teasing was all little boys can do to say ...gee ..i think i love you ;)) very much enjoyed your poem and memories that are instant to me ... what a great time in life!
E.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh E! Love you too! Glad my work could take you back to your school!
:D

[Vinay]

I'm sure everyone would relate to one such sweet childhood memory! Quick & Nice!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you! :D

[StimulateyourCreativity]

Your words make it easy to visualize every moment! good job

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[PoeticChico]

Sounds like a sweet memory. Great job, loved reading it!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

[Deepak Belbase]

why god! it didn't happened to me?
I like it! this moment was like a wish come true...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Bear]

This almost sounds like a limerick, whimsical and fun to read. Thank you for inviting me to come and read it, always a pleasure :~)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you so much!

[Edis Radoncic]

as i was reading this i actually did picture the classroom and the kid staring and the girl pretending to frown and etc haha. i like the theme of the poem. great job!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[FaeryQueen]

great job! keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!

[Amy R]

i like this piece, greatly written.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Thank you!