~The Swing~

Thoughts unfurl,dreams replay, a panorama of picturesque scenes in colorful displays, The breeze in my hair, the wind in my face, The adrenaline rush, heart racing a fast pace, The strong grip, the stoic stature, Feet in the air, one with nature, To and fro, back and forth, The swing swung with me joining in my mirth..!

Reviews

[poetic soul]

aah!! such a pleasure!! very flawless and actually felt like i was swinging cutting the winds.........could feel the poem...... lovely!! :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Kiara]

a breathtaking piece this is! each and every line flowing endlessly till the very end : ) -arabella

[Wildecat]

Awwww the swing, I have had many pleasant hours swinging. Nice write.

[deadlife]

So very wonderful. I felt the forceful push of life..and my going up,leaving my soul behind..Holding tightly to my dreams..Any my jaws tightly clutched of anxiety and fear.
Amazing.
Blessings...

Regards,
rupam

[Michael]

Very nice use of couplets. It even gives the reader the feel of being on a swing. You might like one of mine called "Porch Swing"

Great job.

[Legion]

Lovely piece. Great imagery. Miss those days of swinging. :)

[Zach Colgate]

I got a kick out of that. It was pleasantly light. Cute, too. Nicely done.

[Samuel Dickens]

A delightful and well-written poem. Thanks for writing it.