A beautiful you

A beautiful you

A Poem by Bigdreams
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To all the messy souls out there.

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You are a messy war.
You laugh at your problems as if they're a joke.
You smile at strangers for no reason at all.
Your heart and brain are frenemies forever.
Your eyes says something that's completely opposite to what your mouth does.
You're a coward adventurous and you'll take the risk anyways.
You'll hide away your true feelings so that they won't fade away.
You will dream of things you can't have.
You'll cry over people you didn't even meet.
You fall in love with weird stuff.
You act like you don't care ,although deep inside you pretty much do.
You will do crazy s**t carelessly ,and regret it later.
You'll act so surprised even though you know it all.
You'll take important decisions that you'll cry over the next day.
Truth is..
You are so complicated in a strange but a very lovely way.
My dear, you're so special. You're so precious in this world.. but no one will ever know that but you.

© 2016 Bigdreams


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Bigdreams
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Do u knw that feeling wen u craving a poem dat gives u that great feeling ,sometimes u even tried writing it bt it could satisfy u so u keep searchin endlessly.until u left with dat inch left to open one page ,u lastly found that poem ?.thanks for satisfying my craving

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

So happy it made you feel great :) Thank youu!!



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I really like this because it is written with a common, down to earth voice. There is nothing affected or contrived about this, but it is honest and real. You don't give up your true voice to try and be artistic, you let your voice be your art and it works. Very nice poem:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

yes so true what you said :)..thank you so much
We are all beautiful in our own vulnerable way, no one can ever be like us... No matter how many faults we have but at the end of the we are all precious, there will never be another you and me... So we must be happy with our unique beauty but sadly people don't realize is... Excellent message my dear frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

So true ..Thank you so much:)
Well this is quite stunning !!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much:)!
Do u knw that feeling wen u craving a poem dat gives u that great feeling ,sometimes u even tried writing it bt it could satisfy u so u keep searchin endlessly.until u left with dat inch of energy left to open one page ,u lastly found that poem ?.thanks for satisfying my craving

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Do u knw that feeling wen u craving a poem dat gives u that great feeling ,sometimes u even tried writing it bt it could satisfy u so u keep searchin endlessly.until u left with dat inch left to open one page ,u lastly found that poem ?.thanks for satisfying my craving

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

So happy it made you feel great :) Thank youu!!
It is awesome poem. I had a smile in my face for every line when I read

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bigdreams

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it made you smile :) Thank you!

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Added on May 6, 2016
Last Updated on June 28, 2016
Tags: special, messy, different, war, yourself, beautiful, mind, crazy, weird, love

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Bigdreams
Bigdreams

cairo, heliopolis, Egypt



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