Believe In Me

Believe In Me

A Poem by Jwana Creer Yeshua
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Just believe me?

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Believe In Me:
 
It's hard to say you're ok in the midst of hurt and strife.
 
You seek, find and perservere through every stage of life.
 
You wonder what the future holds; how successful you will be.
 
But you often fail to tell yourself, "I believe in me."
 
You seek to find acceptance; you conform to their new ways.
 
You lose hold of all your values and slowly drift astray.
 
Your passion soon becomes... something very hard to see.
 
Again, you fail to tell yourself, "I believe in me."
 
You search for joy and happiness; somehow come up short.
 
You didn't seek God's Will this time or wait for His report.
 
He wanted you to ask Him, "What is it that I need...?"
 
So simple was the answer, "Just beleive in Me."

© 2008 Jwana Creer Yeshua


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Dear Jwana Creer Yeshua,

This write soars beyond the heavens to deliver a message of hope and confirmation. How you eloquently graced the pages with these humbling words of wisdom is beyond comprehension.

By believing in ourselves; we succeed through all of life's challenges and decrees. Our seasons of life bring diverse situations, self-sacrificing attributes and compassion dealt through inner peace towards others.

Instead of finding ourselves; we find 'who we are not'. In-return, losing everything that we might have gained through select morals and sound-decisions. Where your future once was... your present contains. Passion turned into a 'lust' of seven irrevocable contingents.

We search the world and others for happiness yet all we need-do is peer inwards and we will truly discover the love we desire and can-then reciprocate unto others. When we understand this about ourselves; then we may hear the 'Voice of Truth' and pass judgment no-more. Patience is a virtue we have vacantly 'tossed to the curbside'.

How you portrayed these last two lines was magnificent. I applaud your humbleness and heart. I continue to be amazed by your works... please continue forth.

Humblest regards,
Catechize


Posted 16 Years Ago


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oh that was lovely
no dear i never seek to satisfy others
i never really look for success
i hardly look for the future..for its really not that bright
but yes its hard to say i am ok amidst that hurt and strife
no i never believed in me..
i always believed in how good is me
i always try tell myself i am just one of the herd
i am no better ..i am no superiour
i am just an ordinary guy who do believe..
who dreams..all the time
wonderful..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I realy like this. All you have to do is believe.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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