Loving You.

We met by chance,

And became lovers by choice.

I’ll still remember our first kiss,

Long after you’ve forgotten our last.

 

I stay awake to watch you sleep,

Lingering in the aftermath of your touch.

The moon and its mistress watch in anticipation

As I smoulder in the heated bliss that is you.

 

Your touch burns with desire

And I hear you whisper

“never mind the darkness love,

that’s where the stars shine brightest”

 

Our emotions take motion

plunging to depths I have never known

we become one, I melt in the ecstasy of your embrace

and I lose myself in the adventure of loving you..

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I will be brutally honest. When I saw the stock photo I thought 'oh Bugger. Erotic drivel'. Based upon the ammount of erotic writers who use stock photo's to titilate.

Miss. I am a moron.

I am a moron, because, had I followed my original impulse to move onto another poem of yours I would have missed a truly beautiful and heart lifting poem. I am a moron, for not engaging from the very start with the sheer love that shines through every line of this work. I am a moron for nearly missing another truly wonderful work.

Not only is it a wonderful poem of love, it is an exceptionally well written poem of love. Rarer than you might think. It is very difficult to sum up a moment, more so to encapsulate an emotion. You have done both. Superb work. You are a gifted artist.

I am still a moron, but learning

[Jvonne]

Thank you. You are right about the image I decided to use though. But I guess we are both still learning. Thanks again.

[EMF]

On reflection, the image does work. The problem is not your use, but the overuse by second rate erotica. Sorry if that sounds harsh. I would keep the image. And it is a superb work

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

lovely....full of intensity and love.lovedit.

[Revery]

Very strong, very sexy.

[Pax]

i just love every word that you've mention
loving someone is an adventure. nice thoughts..
well done my friend...

[$êlvån]

Loved each lyn..never mind the darkest love and ur reason moved me:)gr8 job:)

[Kiari Sabon]

its sweet and lovely a blessing of love it seems great write

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You are hopelessly romantic , that is such a beautiful love poem for the one you love xx

[Forest Green]

Nicely sensual, believable, conceptually complete. Perfectly rhapsodic and smooth around the edges.

Love poem it is, yet establishes a nice niche all its own...wonderfully written.

[Coyote Poetry]

"we become one, I melt in the ecstasy of your embrace
and I lose myself in the adventure of loving you.."
A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. The poem described how love should be. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Michael G.]

This piece has a beautiful charm to it.
Sensuously written, well thought out.
A very nice work.
Line 14 "depts" depths?
Keep writing. This is very good.