A simple Story for you to know more about me

Long ago I had faith I would find my one true love. However this will make you laugh a lil. True Story tho!

When I was a kid, I had a dream about a woman, standing on a pier as the day came to a close, she was weeping for me, it was as if it was my last moment on earth and she was my true soul mate. I awoke realizing I was still a child. My whole life I have searched for that woman.

Years later I had a dream that she was near a Beach, like the first time I met her, it was funny because the next day I went to the beach, and it was perfect. There was no music however I felt like there should have been. I met a girl that day named Faith, that day two horse were racing along the ocean, it was pretty awesome I assumed that meant faith was the women for me. Sadly she stole not only my trust, but my car as well.

I lived my life like that for years hoping to find the right one.

These days I seek someone to get to know and see where life takes us. Life is funny sometimes.

Who knows if you will respond, who knows if I am meant to be more then just a good friend.
You won't know till you respond.

I can promise I won't steal your car.

Author's Note

i WROTE THIS AND WANTED TO SHARE.

Reviews

[Matt Pellegrini]

This is a good story, in terms of the sort of foretelling feelings that it produces only to have them undermined by reality.

Obviously, I don't think what happened to you in the story is "good," but I do think it's nice that you put this experience out there. If you haven't already thought about this, I would consider incorporating this whole story/experience into a work of your own fiction if you can.

The imagery of the dreams nice. It has a strong serendipitous feeling, and if the character it would happen to has a nice sense of humor about it, the end would probably strike the reader as pretty funny but also keep the character sympathetic.

Glad you shared though, as some real experiences make even better stories than the made up ones.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I LIKE IT! YOUR RIGHT ON WITH THE WORDS!