Music

Music is what i use to get by
lets me sleep good at night
soft melody that raps around me when im tired
Closes my eyes and goes into my mind

Helps me better myself to become a new person
In my body all day long
Helps me to focus
This is my high
I take a pull and i dont know when to stop
Makes me feel so good
This is what i need
This is what i love
I can relate its so hot
This is my heart and my love
Its in my vains
This is what makes me tough
What sewds me and makes me rough
Music is my high and my love.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Very nice! I could really relate with you on this one, especially in the lines:
Helps me better myself to become a new person
In my body all day long

and:
Music is my high and my love.

In a way, I wish you had more of a flow between the first and second stanzas, but other than that, this was really good! I enjoyed reading it.
~PaperHearts

[Voice11]

This is a very well written poem filled with your passion for music..very good!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Thank goodness for music. A wonderful well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah