My storm

Rain coming down around my face
Lightening crashing the ground from place to place
Thunder rolling loud till my eardrums pop
Because theres never any time for me to just stop
Stop and think about my life…..

Stop and think about whats causing so much strife
Living my everyday someone elses way
Never stopping to take a day to play it my way
Death is a meer cry in this storm I live in
My tears coming down like the rain from the sky
And my mouth shouts out HELP! like the loud thunder on high

My heat is breaking
I m ready to die!
And depression is my new obsession
Every day I wake
The rainy storm decides to take
This fragile crimson heart of mine
And twist it like a wine
Because my heart is no longer mine
This storm of life took it all away..
And now its going to pay!

Reviews

[Voice11]

wow, this is very sad but very descriptive. I think though on the second part you mean " my *heart* is breaking" not my heat is breaking... but a very good poem indeed!