Emo kid

Here lay the emo kid in his house,
He lay quite as a mouse.
In his hand hold a knife,
Which he used to carve out his life.
He lay staining his carpet red,
Because he wanted to be dead.
So he pulled the srting,
To end this thing.
He wanted death so much,
He loved blood as much,
That he wanted to see it right then,
He did not realize he made a mistake when,
He cut a heart in his chest,
And said, "I will die the best"
So here lay the emo kid dead,
And this is what his tombstone read:
R.I.P Kris, for you we miss.
 

Reviews

[Babbette Francis]

In his hand hold a knife,
Which he used to carve out his life.
He lay staining his carpet red,
Because he wanted to be dead.

This stanza is so strong in meaning that it's carved itself in my heart. The rhyme of the piece is very good and the overall message profound. It's sad to think this happens everyday, leaving a hole in the hearts of ones who love and care about the lonely soul who felt this was the only way out. Sad! Sad indeed!

[Voice11]

This is very sad! I agree with babbette, that particular part is just bone chilling! It does suck that this happens, I know from having someone I care about deeply, wanting to do this and almost did...Great piece of work I love it!