How It Feels

How It Feels

I know how it feels

like being naked in a crowd

you feel opened up

you feel that everyone is watching you

I know how it feels

for I to am going through this

It becomes part of you

It already is part of me

Author's Note

this is my first poem. if you dont like it be gentle. tell me if you like it

Reviews

[Kaden Sylvers]

"you feel opened up"- this line can be stronger...maybe use a word like "raw" or "torn open".....idk