Pissed off

This poem has some language that might turn off writings!!!

pissed off bc been

taken advantage of

not only in 

personal life

but work life

busting a*s

for nothing

getting treated

horrible

trying to be

the great guy

but getting nowhere

with that

guess being a bad

guy gets ppl

far

instead of being the good

guy

pissed off not

having someone to talk 

too 

someone who wants to hear

things and dont matter 

the time of day

ppl who thought

were friends

arent really

just being friends

to say that they 

have a friend that is

different

not being able to

move forward in life

stuck in a rut

pretty boring

trying to move

forward but not getting

a dam place

pissed off seeing

ppl who dont want to

work living the life

struggling everyday for 

nothing

working for nothing

making small mistakes

that are blown up

pissed off not being

able to sleep

some nights

worrying about stuff

that shouldnt worry about

but do anyways

Reviews

[LouisianaBird]

I love how manic and off the cuff this is. Very raw and emotional. Much love and my best wishes go to you

[Chelsea]

I couldn't relate more! I just quit my job of 8 years because I couldn't take the stress of busting my a*s and getting nowhere!

Great piece! I love how real it is!

[Hannah]

It can be really hard when people don't treat us fairly, and when we feel stuck in life. Venting, like you did here, can really help sometimes. I hope you feel better now and can stay in a good mood for a while. I'm not always on this website, but when I am, I'm always open to talk if you want.

[TragicEndings]

this is so relatable , reminds me of myself when someone pisses me off and all these thoughts come into my head. nice piece!

[Sarah's words]

I love how honest this is Justin... it's so real and relatable!! It made me feel better knowing others feel this way sometimes too!! :) And don't give up on work or anything... the people who are taking advantage of you aren't actually doing it because of you... they're doing it because of problems in their own lives! :(

[Scorpion Flametail]

This really shows human emotion in an original type of way. I've never seen anything quite like it. It's definitely not just another poem written about life.

[Justin]

Thanks, the title says it all

[Scorpion Flametail]

I agree, it says it all.

[Justin]

it is a strong emotion being angry

[sette]

it is an emotional poem and very much human in the display of emotions

[Justin]

thanks :) sometimes that are feelings are

[sette]

i have already reviewed the poem

[Diane]

I feel ya Justin! Its on the money.

[Justin]

thanks :) i am glad u can relate to it :)

[Diane]

Now more then ever

[Justin]

i am glad u are my friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I feel the poem my friend. I worked for a large company for 15 years. I managed a nightshift. Fired me last week. I'm fine. Hard work and untrustworthy people can test us. I hope you feel better. Now I have time to read some poetry and story. Thank you Justin for sharing your powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Justin]

your welcome, thanks for reading it and that u can relate to it

[Coyote Poetry]

A bear of a world and I understood your words.