LOOK DEEP

look deep inside someone before you judge them because u dont know what they have been through

look really

deep

what you see in the

outside is totally

different from

what is in the 

inside

what is on the 

outside may

be a way to 

cover what is inside

inside the pain

the hurt

the frustration

angry

sadness

hate

taken advantage

of from

people who

thought could be 

trusted

but they lied

and who avoided

never gave a

reason

continue to look

deep 

because the inside

is way more important

then the outside

Reviews

[Jennifer]

So accurate, everyone has a person inside and show another one outside, some because are afraid, or doesn't want to show their true feelings.. but I guess humans are like that... I guess if it was that easy to know what is really inside a person life would be way more different, but not interesting... I loved it :) good work

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right Justin. Outside face is rarely the true face. I did like the honest words and thoughts. In this world. Few people show real face. Thank you Justin for sharing the amazing words and thoughts. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Shy_muse]

Thank you for this beautiful poem. 10/10! It is really important to remember to look deep and past the surface. And once you reach the deep it is also important to keep looking deep otherwise you find danger in resurfacing. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings

[Jas]

This resonates with me personally, I'm continually judged by my peers. And it's quite interesting to see their reactions when they find how I am inside and realize I am the way I am for a reason

[Madeleine Celeste]

This leaves so much to imagine, so much to wonder about who hurt, who was hurt, and all of the hurt and pain and sadness was so evident. You have done amazingly well.

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Yes I agree, no one sees ones real self but what they see on the outside but the truth is really inside. Good job 🤗

[Justin]

Thanks Nancy 😉😉

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

You welcome

[Justin]

I am glad u enjoy the new writing that I have posted in this new account

[sette]

the way you describe pain is somewhat unique. this poem motivates me to accept pain as what it is

[Justin]

Thanks 😃😃😃

[Autumn]

This was amazing! You wrote something that is so true to life. The outside can be control, letting people see only what you want them to see, while the inside is wild, uncontrolled, and completely you.

[Amy]

Very good poem and definetly the trith!

[Justin]

Thanks Amy!!! :)

[Veronica Staehle]

This is so on point of what is a common human experience, and you did a great job depicting it. External expressions are controlled, but internal existence is what is authentic and real. What could be more valuable than your true self. Beautiful.