CROWDS

The feeling when I get around crowds of lots, lots, and lots of people.

where am i

what are these

people thinking

do they think

i am strange

or weird

why do

they keep

looking at me

is this a reality

or a night mare

how do i escape

or do i

suck it up

and stick with

it

where are the people

who i feel comfortable

with

did they leave

or they near by

i need to get

out of here

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the thoughts of oddness and needing to escape. Sometime we know we are in the wrong place. You made the reader believe your words. Thank you Justin for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Justin]

Thanks John!!! That is wat life is at times

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I had escaped many places and you are welcome Justin.

[Veronica Staehle]

This stirs up such a swarm of emotions, not only with your message but with your word choices, and how you typed them line by line. Great depiction.

[OnlycallmeKathryn]

You really captured social anxiety well. I can relate I definitely like this one

[Courtney Hough]

I really like this. One thing; i would add punctuation. "do they think

i am strange

or weird?"
it would make it a bit more powerful. Wonderful job!

[Justin]

thanks Courtney :) :) i am glad u liked, i am trying to be a great poet :)

[Emere]

I love the style that this is written in. You really captured the sort of hurried and anxious thoughts that a demophobic person would feel. Nice work!

[Justin]

thanks :) :) :)

[Warrior]

I know the feeling.
Being surrounded and alone all at the same time. Great capture of the moment

[Justin]

Thanks😉 sometimes we cant help being near crowds

[Warrior]

Sadly yes. If only there was a magic button that could teleport us from crowds to a peaceful reading nook with tea and blankets

[Justin]

yup I agree with u :)

[Hannah]

I've never been a fan of crowds. Being near too many people at once can freak me out.

[Simone Davis]

A well written piece highlighting our comfort zones

[Justin]

Thanks 😃 we all have comfort zones!!

[Rye]

Very nicely written and said. enjoyed

[Justin]

thanks :) crowds can be annoying at times but sometimes we cant avoid them!!