SPOOKY

First writing on my new account. Felt like doing a picture poem. Something creative.

rocks covered with mist

looks spooky

barely see the rocks

the colors go

great together

it is looks like

something from

scary story

looks like it is

October

where the weather

isn't that good

but really it is July

the aftermath of the rain

not so clear at the top
but clear towards the bottom

Author's Note

I actually took that picture.

Reviews

[Hannah]

That's a beautiful picture. Where did you take it?

I like how you include your thoughts about the picture. Nature can be very inspiring.

[Rye]

I like how you write, you use imagery.
so very nicely written.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) I enjoy doing poems like this bc you can be creative with it, you can think outside the box, but I enjoy seeing ppls points of view :)

[Simone Davis]

I thought you capture the mist as spooky as half seeing if that makes sense as almost you can see part but where is the rest what’s underneath it all....funny how people interpret others poetry

[Justin]

thanks :) yup it is funny bc everyone has a different point of view, that is wat makes writing so creative!! it was all about timing, it was just perfect timing for me

[Heather]

I thought it was interesting that the poem was titled 'Spooky' because it didn't read like something traditionally scary. And it actually turns out that it isn't October but July, after a summer rainstorm. Serves as a reminder that things that initially appear frightening can actually be beautiful :)

[Justin]

thanks heather :) it was just the perfect timing, I guess I have a nack of catching the perfect timing when I take pictures!!

[dw817]

It's a beautiful photo and enchanting poem. We're headed towards sleet and snow tonight here in the states. And yes, fog can really be spooky sometimes.

[Justin]

thanks for commenting on buddy :) it is all about timing