Over-thinking mind

Over thinking mind

Break my thoughts

And look the disastrous

Pain you brought

Ever fighting

Bust a hole

Here I’m lying 

Losing control

Mind projection

Mental picture

I’m so brainwashed

With godly scripture

Follow the rules

Obey your orders

Lay your head down

Break your borders

Fallow me now

I’m your guide

All to easy 

To run and hide

No thinking mind

Can break my thoughts

Never disastrous

The laws you brought

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Love those lines, I'm so brainwashed with Godly scripture. We are brainwashed from so many directions. Our saving grace is when we can realize it! It can be a sneaky b*****d! Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes if we allow the people to control us. Easy to become a robot. Better to run with the wolves then wander helplessly with the sheep. I like this poem. Freedom is took from us daily. Poor mother can't smoke a cigarette in a public place. 75 years old and won't leave the house. She tells me. I will smoke my damn cigarettes. New ID's will control our every movement. We need less government and we need to be free. A wise man look for the real truth. A lot of liars are leading us to people without the ability to think and solve problems. A powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote

[NinjaPi]

i love the rhyming. lord knows i could never do what you have done.

[Tessa Ross]

i love this(:
(you know im not good at reviews so this is all im going to put)

[MusicMartyrs]

if your over-thinking mind helps you write or contributes to your work then i'd say..keep it :) if not..well i haven't found an antidote yet but if i do you'll be the first to know.