Hell is a start
A Poem by
Justin Street
Why are you here
Inflicting pain
Shut up, disappear
Do I entertain
I hate you so
Why do you stalk
I’m no quid pro quo
Do not try to talk
This is my house
Go on just leave
You are not my spouse
With the lies you weave
What have you left
But my burnt heart
You’re in hell for theft
At least hell’s a start
© 2010 Justin Street
Reviews
Although I have joined writers cafe, I love the poem :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Your emotion is amazing, as well as your diction. Sorry i just really like that word. I just joined writers cafe and out of all the people writing i have read i would have to say yours shows some of the best emotion.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Your emotion is amazing, as well as your diction. Sorry i just really like that word. I just joined writers cafe and out of all the people writing i have read i would have to say yours shows some of the best emotion.
i love this one! i told you it was good!
Posted 14 Years Ago
i love this one! i told you it was good!
Ouch. Nice. The last stanza is by far the most powerful, I love it. Fabulous job. ♥
~Blessed Be~
Posted 14 Years Ago
Ouch. Nice. The last stanza is by far the most powerful, I love it. Fabulous job. ♥
~Blessed Be~
the hate just shows man .. nice write .
Posted 14 Years Ago
the hate just shows man .. nice write .
Whoa! Powerful write here.
Wonderful rant.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Whoa! Powerful write here.
Wonderful rant.
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Added on May 27, 2010
Last Updated on May 27, 2010
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Justin Street Clarksville, TN
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Well I am Justin or Jt. I love photography, writing, and ping pong =). I can carry a conversation with pretty much anyone and everyone. =P The thing i love most is reviews =) so make me happy. I still..
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