Holy diver

I’m what they call
Scourge of the sky
From clouds I fall
Don’t ask why

No matter blood and gore
I am the survivor
Through Carnage I soar
The holy diver

Blazing wings beat
All battles halted
Feeling disapproving heat
Shining light, exalted

Wave of judgment flows
To Hell I am your driver
I am your pain and woe
The holy diver

Author's Note

I got this idea from a song by dio called "holy diver", but to make it clear i just used the name. I have completely morphed the name to this image.
The significance of "holy diver" is that of some entity (angel/demon) diving down through the clouds to end the world of man.

Reviews

[Adora.xo]

This, in one word, was- Epic. The diction was strong, yet simple, and the imagery was vivid, and breath-taking. The tone of this poem echoes in the readers mind, wonderful wonderful job! I love the last two lines "I am you pain and woe/ The holy diver" I may quote you in something eventually, one day. :P I hope you do't mind haha

~Adora

[Taylor H.]

I agree with unloved kitty. You have a talent!

[Unloved_kitty]

This is a really good poem =] I really love it ~x~

[Adarsh]

Loved the write very much and the way you expressed the idea succinctly in each line. The second stanza was extremely good! :)

But couldn't see why the 'Holy Diver'?

[Rawr!!XD]

I love this! You did a great job with the imagery here!

[Star Wolf]

Love this! It's like some kind of Dark Angel or Demon coming down from the sky to create destruction and pain of all sorts. I love the imagery in this and the rhyming. Awesome job.

[G. Anderson]

I love that song :) And this poem as well. I like how you took the theme and then personalized it to fit you.
Great write.
~Gage

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem, I love it.

[chaotic katie]

this is a great write with fantastic imagry your a great writer keep it up

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Thanks for the credits. You wrote some great images. I am also a Dio
fan. Some of his lyrics were very poetic. I like the resolve and strength
in this poem. It wreaks of determination. Sweet work!

[[KL]]

Great write here.. Simply awesome. (: