Do you miss me

If I beat my head
Pulled my hair
Gripped a trigger
Would you miss me

Well before I do
I have a situation
This moment is my last
Would you kiss me

Your lips touch mine
Same soft loving glaze
A minute for a lifetime
Look away, don’t see

Blast are my brains
I bet now you regret
That bullet was meant for you
Do you miss me

Reviews

[Livenrite]

Very well written! thanks for sharing:)

[Tessa Ross]

yes;this is a very heartfelt& deep poem.
"Well before I do
I have a situation
This moment is my last
Would you kiss me"
*made me cry.
i love your way of writing, and how everything, even though having barely any rhyme, still flows as i read.

[Laura Yida <3]

this is awsome