Evil Eye

Glaring from the dark
Its piercing iris
Takes me whole

Eyes of evil
Wait to kill
A silent mold

Take the breath
From cold lips
And your heads will roll

Evil eyes
I despise
Thy soul

Reviews

[[KL]]

A really good write. Short, but straight to the point. :) A great piece overall.. Last stanza was my favourite part tbh. :D

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem. I wrote a song about my evil eye.

[(:]

I love it.
The ending was strong and solemn.
This makes me think of the saying, "If looks could kill.."

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this.
My favorite part of this is
"I despise
Thy soul."
Thanks for sharing. :)

[E. L. Foley]

I love the "a silent mold". Delightfully unexpected, yet it fits.

[Jessica]

Short simple stanza's but very powerful. Beautifully written.
"Piercing iris." is amazing.
The ending is very powerful. Very strong. Well done.