My Sock

My Sock

A Poem by justice

My sock
caught a snag
and a single thread
unraveled.

Without a thought,
I pulled the strand

And now,
I am left
with nothing
but a pile of cotton

I have a terrible habit
of dragging my feet.

© 2011 justice


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justice
Just a thought... what do you think?

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I'm getting that you using the double meaning of 'dragging your feet'..good idea..I think you were a little vague..but clever idea..

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I am an out of work, out of school, out of luck 21-year-old trying to make it in the world of writing. I am fairly new to sharing my work and I am just looking to improve myself. I welcome ALL critici.. more..

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