My Sock
A Poem by
justice
My sock
caught a snag
and a single thread
unraveled.
Without a thought,
I pulled the strand
And now,
I am left
with nothing
but a pile of cotton
I have a terrible habit
of dragging my feet.
© 2011 justice
Author's Note
Just a thought... what do you think?
Reviews
This is so sweet :)
and creative!
Great work!
Posted 13 Years Ago
EXCELLENT! Very clever love! Serious kudos lol You have connected all to an intelligent level, the final line - CLASSIC lol xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
EXCELLENT! Very clever love! Serious kudos lol You have connected all to an intelligent level, the final line - CLASSIC lol xx
A poem about socks. Funny things we do need the socks. Without them we would have sore and painful feet. I like the poem. I'm lucky. I marry a seamstress. Can repair those beat up and worn socks. A very good poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A poem about socks. Funny things we do need the socks. Without them we would have sore and painful feet. I like the poem. I'm lucky. I marry a seamstress. Can repair those beat up and worn socks. A very good poem.
Coyote
hahah socks! :D i like it. smiple and cute.
Posted 13 Years Ago
hahah socks! :D i like it. smiple and cute.
a very different poem, well written and easy to read. I like it :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
a very different poem, well written and easy to read. I like it :D
a small decision can change our life....humorous...loved the sattire
Posted 13 Years Ago
a small decision can change our life....humorous...loved the sattire
It's a nice way of thinking. I like it and the humor
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's a nice way of thinking. I like it and the humor
Quite amusing. Life as a sock...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Quite amusing. Life as a sock...
lol I like this. Makes me think of a old I Love Lucy episode.
Posted 13 Years Ago
lol I like this. Makes me think of a old I Love Lucy episode.
i think you make the every day things turn to gold in your poems love it
Posted 13 Years Ago
i think you make the every day things turn to gold in your poems love it
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justice Omaha, NE
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I am an out of work, out of school, out of luck 21-year-old trying to make it in the world of writing. I am fairly new to sharing my work and I am just looking to improve myself. I welcome ALL critici..
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