Bathing In Rose Petals

Deep, red, sangria petals 

Eyes closed 

My naked body soaking in these clear bathtub waves 

Mind drifting

Deeper I sink

      Head under water

      Brown skin coated

Floral scented 

Dreamy state 

High without the Mary Jane 

Eyes open

Nostrils burning 

Heart pumping

I sit up

Watching the petals sink in between my palms 

I inahle

Rub the petals across my face

Across my skin

Across my body

Reviews

[Nipplegrinder]

I really like this. I saw this. It was a very pleasant vision. Outstanding.

[Destiny Izaguirre Cortez]

Thank you hun
I really appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Your description is fantastic. I love the way you arrange your words. It really speaks of the petals and its power on the palm of the writer. Well crafted.

[Destiny Izaguirre Cortez]

Thank you very much!

[Rain]

The descriptive language is immersive. I love that you've made a short experience into a narrative of sensation.

[Destiny Izaguirre Cortez]

Thank you, I really appreciate your review!