I like it, simple lines that speak loudly of how you feel. This is what poetry is about. It is about the darkness and the light we see and feel. Keep writing. You might be interested in my Sensation without Cessation (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hlcerveise/1745568/). It shows the darkness and the lightness I was feeling at the time I wrote it.
Well done
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
Sometimes people are so afraid to share.. read moreThank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
Sometimes people are so afraid to share how they feel.
We all have something to turn to when we need to express ourselves.
Poetry is beautiful yet there is so much hidden behind the written lines.
I am definitely going to read your work!
As they say, poetry can create epic just by using handful of words... By your first line a picture of rainy day comes into my mind and by your cloudy skies my mind imagines the gloominess of nature, and the last line means very very deeply... There is always Sundays hiding behind the grey clouds and it just waiting to come out soon... I just wrote a sane type of poem today...
I like it, simple lines that speak loudly of how you feel. This is what poetry is about. It is about the darkness and the light we see and feel. Keep writing. You might be interested in my Sensation without Cessation (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hlcerveise/1745568/). It shows the darkness and the lightness I was feeling at the time I wrote it.
Well done
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
Sometimes people are so afraid to share.. read moreThank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
Sometimes people are so afraid to share how they feel.
We all have something to turn to when we need to express ourselves.
Poetry is beautiful yet there is so much hidden behind the written lines.
I am definitely going to read your work!
I love rain as long as I don't have to drive in it. This is short but effective.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I definitely agree with you, driving in the rain sucks. I find the sound of rain rather soothing. Th.. read moreI definitely agree with you, driving in the rain sucks. I find the sound of rain rather soothing. Thank you :)
8 Years Ago
I like to sit by the window and watch. I think its soothing too. You're welcome.