Thoughts on a rainy day

Thoughts on a rainy day

A Poem by Destiny Izaguirre Cortez

Rainy days

Cloudy skies

Hidden rays and sad eyes

© 2016 Destiny Izaguirre Cortez


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I like it, simple lines that speak loudly of how you feel. This is what poetry is about. It is about the darkness and the light we see and feel. Keep writing. You might be interested in my Sensation without Cessation (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hlcerveise/1745568/). It shows the darkness and the lightness I was feeling at the time I wrote it.

Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Izaguirre Cortez

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
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As they say, poetry can create epic just by using handful of words... By your first line a picture of rainy day comes into my mind and by your cloudy skies my mind imagines the gloominess of nature, and the last line means very very deeply... There is always Sundays hiding behind the grey clouds and it just waiting to come out soon... I just wrote a sane type of poem today...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it, simple lines that speak loudly of how you feel. This is what poetry is about. It is about the darkness and the light we see and feel. Keep writing. You might be interested in my Sensation without Cessation (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hlcerveise/1745568/). It shows the darkness and the lightness I was feeling at the time I wrote it.

Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Izaguirre Cortez

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
Sometimes people are so afraid to share.. read more
I love rain as long as I don't have to drive in it. This is short but effective.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Izaguirre Cortez

8 Years Ago

I definitely agree with you, driving in the rain sucks. I find the sound of rain rather soothing. Th.. read more
Gray

8 Years Ago

I like to sit by the window and watch. I think its soothing too. You're welcome.

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Added on June 6, 2016
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