Life in the Darkness

Anyone who has been where I have been, will get this. And maybe one other on here.

Cavernous, yet a tight fit

Busy, yet strangely calming

Seen, yet unseen

Boredom broken by instances of terror

Acknowledged, yet denied.

A goal that takes forever to reach,

And when reached, leads to failure.

Author's Note

Just a small taste of what it is like to be underwater on a submarine.

Reviews

[Dye]

Nice to see something new ;) Very interesting for sure. Keep them coming.

[Justaguy]

Thanks. It was a spur of the moment brain flash...lol. I still have to rewrite my past stories....

[Dye]

Sometimes those are the most genuine, because you don't have time to think- just write.

[Justaguy]

yeah...and thinking hurts...lol

[Frieda P]

I won't give it away since I know where you were going with this one, but you hit it spot on! Battle stations torpedoed! ha good one Ron....

[Justaguy]

Thank you. Not bad for a spur of the moment thing huh?...lol

[Frieda P]

No excellent as a matter of fact.....

[Justaguy]

Awwwww. (Blush) (Kicks the ground)...lol